Robert

 

 

 

     1. The Problem (Expository Text)school 3.0

 

Wednesday, Jan 14, 2004

 

 

 

 

 

school 3.0

 

 

 

 

 

Robert

A new school is needed because the classrooms and the gym room. The school needs these things.

The gym room is not connected to the school. We have to walk across the street to the gym room. We can easily catch a cold or pneumonia walking over there. If we catch colds we cannot come to school and learn. As an example, when we have gym have to get our coats and get in line and walk downstairs. This takes a lot of time. We could use this time to do more math. Gyms in others school are connected and they don't waste time.

The classroom is not they have the heat on and no a c. the kids get really sweaty and thirsty and it is hard to stay focused when you are hot you cannot walk hart. In fact the temperature in winter is real cold. The heat doesn’t come on and we shiver. We complain but still have to wear coats in the room.

We need a new school because they give my new school
To Jenner the gym room is not the school gym.

 

 

Robert

   

01/14/04