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     1. The Problem (Expository Text)new school 3.0

 

Tuesday, Jan 20, 2004

 

 

 

 

 

new school 3.0

 

 

 

 

 

Gym across the street

Mycheal
1/20/04
Room 405



We need a new building for our school. The two main reasons that we need a new Byrd academy Is that we don't have a lunchroom and a gym. Because we don't have a good building we need a new school

We need a new school because we eat in the hallway. The food is bad. The floor is dirty. There are no trays. The fruit is bad. There is a whole bunch of garbage. They wash the trays again and again. The tray has stain in the tray. The tray have crack. We will be good to our school.

We don't have a gym in the school. We have to go across the street to go to the gym is not attached. When we go out side we can't go in the gym We would like a gym in the school. And we will be warm. And it is cold when we walk to the gym. And it is cold in the gym.

We need a new school. It is not good to eat in the hallway. And the gym is across the street. Come to the school we will show you.

 

 

 

Mycheal

   

01/20/04