Lamarius

 

 

 

     1. The Problem (Expository Text)New school 2.0

 

Wednesday, Jan 14, 2004

 

 

 

 

 

New school 2.0

 

 

 

 

 

The view of an assembly. I can't see anything!

Lamarius

January 8, 2004
Byrd Academy Room 405 5th

We need a whole new school building at Byrd Academy. The main reasons are the gym room, the classroom, lunchroom, and the stage auditorium. They are not good they are old and rusty. To fix these problems individually would help. We need a new school building to satisfy our needs.

The classrooms are not a good place to work and learn. The classroom doors are old and rusty and messed up. The classrooms' windows are messed up. They have holes in them and they are plastic windows. You cannot see through them. The classrooms walls are dirty and rusty and have spider webs on the walls. Also the classrooms need some lockers because people can steal things out our book bags. When we hang up our coats we have to twist the coat hangers around and sometime they fall and people start stepping on their coats. Kids get mad and are ready to fight that's why we need lockers. For I thing will not get messing.

Another reason we need a new school is because of the gym. We do not have a gym we use a park gym across the street from us. We have to put on our coats to go outside the gym across the street from are school. The gym is clean but we want our own gym in our school. We cannot practice or so at for recess because we don't have a gym.

The restrooms are really mess up The sink is leaky. We do not have soap or paper towels. The restrooms are smelly and it does not have a garbage cans. We do not have door stalls and have no privacy. Another problem with our school is the lunchroom. We do not have a lunchroom we eat in a hallway. We have tables and they make bad food and I am hungry so I eat a lot of food before I go to school and they make bad food and want until I go home. We have no choice.

Finally we also do not have an auditorium or stage at Byrd. This is a problem because when we assembly’s people heads are in the way because we have to have the assemblies in arced hallway. There is no seating and difficult to see. There are never enough seats for everybody and people have to stand as an example we had the Harlem globetrotters come to our school. I couldn't see anything. If are school had stage I would be happy because I would have a better chance to watch the show.

Based on the facts we need a new bird school. The things make our school a hand plover to learn. I will like to visit to our place to see how if you are. I think you would agree.

 

 

 

Lamarius Brewer

   

01/14/04