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     1. The Problem (Expository Text)A new school building 2.0

 

Wednesday, Jan 14, 2004

 

 

 

 

 

A new school building 2.0

 

 

 

 

 

The gym is very far away!

Kaprice
Byrd Academy
January 22, 2004


We need a new school building because the temperature and lockers are a disgrace. I can't learn in this school because of these things I am about to tell you. We need a new school so that when we do get a new building our stuff will be secure. Having a new building is important because everything will be right and the school will be more comfortable to learn in.

The heat doesn't work when we need it. It is cold in our room as if we are outside. It should not be cold in our room like that. The thermostats do not work. That is why we need a new school. Then when we have to go to gym and we come back and then it hot because the heat is on. And all of a suddenly the heat come on. Also they do not have Air conditioners for the summer and it is going to be hot. Kids and teachers can get real sweaty and pass out from the heat. It's uncomfortable to learn in the temperature isn't right. If we don't have the right temperature we can freeze to death and we are going to complain.


The stuff in the closet is not secure. Our stuff just disappears from the closet. People are stepping on other people stuff. As an example it hard to keep stuff clean because it falls on the ground and people step on it. That's why we need lockers with a lock and a combination to go with it. It is bad old closets at this dumb old school.

Can you please give us a new school? A new school because this school is not nice and it doesn't help us with problems.

I cannot learn in this school building because of these things. I do not think they can be fixed but instead a whole new school may help us. The Temperature is low and we don't have any lockers. There are just a few things that are wrong about our school please look at the pictures or even come and visit. You will see that we definitely need a new school.

Water on bathroom floor.

 

 

Kaprice

   

01/14/04